My name is John Smith, and I am a senior at Frederick Douglass High School. I am a good student with a 3.4 grad point average. The university that I want to attend is Georgia Tech because I want to be a civil engineer and there are many reasons why I should be enrolled. Firstly, I am a hard working and dedicated student. Secondly, I am a friendly, sociable person. Finally, I have condemned myself to be a success.
Primarily, I am a hard working and dedicated student. I've always put my best in everything that I've done academically. I am not the type of person who gets put up to a big challenge and backs down. I will always rise to the peak of my production and accomplish my goal. For example, I was one of the few selected out of many to participate in the Semester Abroad program with APS. I had to be interviewed in Spanish and I had to be able to respond in Spanish.
Moreover, I am a friendly, sociable person. Everyone who knows me can attest to that. I am hardly ever in a bad mood that would take me to the point of being rude or inconsiderate to someone else. Just about everyone I meet I am able to get along with. I am never disrespectful to my elders or people of authority. I try to greet everyone I meet with a smile. I believe that one bad impression can mess up a reputation that may have taken a lifetime to gain.
Ultimately, I have condemned myself to be a success. Words of faith are the only thing that keeps me steadily walking along my path to success. That is why I engraved it upon my soul to be a success. My motto is that success is my only option failure is not. With this motto and my strong spirit I cannot and will not be stopped or even postponed from achieving the best. My spirit is my strongest quality and it cannot be destroyed by anyone.
In conclusion, enrolling me in Georgia Tech would not only be a benefit to me, but for the school as well. Firstly, I am a hard working and dedicated student.