Katie's Inferno
Dante Alighieri once revealed to me that Hell is a matter of levels. Rings of sin stacked invertedly down to the deepest degree of paying for free will. The inscription over the gates to this place of wretchedness read, “God was moved to create Hell by “Justice”’(Inferno, Canto III .7). Yes, the perfection of God’s justice. A justice in which the Sullen choke on mud, the wrathful assail upon one another, the Gluttonous are forced to consume excrement, and so on and so forth. Sinners are damned to the same level at which they have committed their sin. So in other words one gets out of something what one puts into it. A cornucopia of common sense. Therefore, as if never attempted, I will try to explain myself as if I were Hell. A mere series of stages in which my actions and decisions placed me in different levels. And not unlike Virgil was a guide to Dante, I will guide you through the nine rings of myself, but halting somewhere in the middle for I know that I have not even begun to ponder the latter part of my existence.Our voyage begins in the first few days of my high school career, Limbo, as it were. Students being thrown into a pit of classes and grades, to fight for a direction to take
in life. Frightened by the words like college and transcript we duck into the nearest corridor. A timid stroll guided by teachers, parents, and coaches, advising what direction to take and each tugging a different way. Finally an escape route reveals itself! A dim light followed by what seems to be a land of opportunity. It is in fact the place in which I was given my greatest opportunity, golf. Believe it or not, the game of golf has and will change my life. I have worked extremely hard and believe I have done well. I was the number two golfer on the varsity team my freshmen year, the number one golfer my sophomore, junior, and senior year, I have received the Most Valuable Player award on the varsity team four years in a row. My junior year scored well enough to make it to a qualifying golf tournament held by the California Interscholastic Federation(CIF), Southern Section. I scored will and have since then improved. I’ve learned and accomplished so many things through golf that, now, I am ready to approach those words that had scared me so deeply. Because I am very talented at golf I was able to conquer things that many of my competition could not. So with a strong foothold and a vast amount of support I was able to move onto the next level, which we are now entering. We have now embarked on the second ring of my hell. It is this place in which my traits and values reside. First we will come upon an old bo
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