The writer made several methodological and organizational mistakes in numerous parts of his article. First, the writer failed to thoroughly explain the purpose of the sand, and how it was going to mislead the police¡¦ investigation like it was intended for. Second, it was illogical when the waiter stabbed the victim simply to ensure her death. According to the article, the stab wound was intended to divert the investigation and remove the suspicion off the owner, but such behavior only worsen the situation in reality. Finally, it was uncalled for and poorly organized for the writer to suddenly mention that the waiter¡¦s father at home was simply his foster parent.

t on the day of victim¡¦s death, and found that her chest was stabbed and signs of heavy impact on her head was present. The waiter also told Detective Jiang that it was a known secret among all the restaurant employees that the chef of the restaurant and the owner¡¦s wife were having an affair. The talkative waiter further informed that it was weird that he found some sand on the restaurant floor as the victim¡¦s body was found. Shortly after the conversation with the waiter, another customer in the restaurant approached Detective Jiang and revealed that he was one of the police officers who were present on the day of victim¡¦s death. The officer further revealed tha

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