1. Using Proper Diction
... 's what we did: 'One example of an awe-inspiring dinosaur is the velociraptor, while another is the T-Rex. In a fight, these two beasts would pretty much beat every other prehistoric lizard, although a T-Rex would obviously defeat a single velociraptor easily because of its superior size.' The fixed, non-repetitious version now sounds not only more interesting but has more authority. Developing Tone ... ...
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- Grade Level: High School