... she had anxiety attacks. Her uncle threatened her when she went public with news of her discovery of her uncle and Franziska having illicit relationship. This threat and her uncle chasing her couple of times after that, left a strong impression on her mind which continued to haunt her and was a part of her anxiety attacks. Critique This passage touches a very ugly ... ...

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• Grade Level: High School