His lips turned red and looked like the hot soup didn't seem to bother him much as he continued to drink spoonfuls of hot soup. ... The blister started coming up from his flesh, but he kept pouring and drinking and laughing until his knees couldn't bare him anymore. ... Dave was busy with a meat, while he began to cut the meat his attention slowly shifted from the piece of dead animal to his left hand. ...

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• Grade Level: High School