... with the academy the more likely your changes were of making the routine for the recital. On April 5th the sign was posted outside our dance room. My heart was racing as I made my way into the front of the crowd. Girls were crying and hysterical because they didn't make the dance. Kelli was standing next to me holding my hand ... hall, all those nerves flowed back into me. All the feelings in the stomach rushed back to me as though it was the first day of practice. My heart was racing as I walked, I knew that my face must have look terrified because the girl in front of me turned #24 pg...

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... end his life. However, at the end, he does become like them, talking in their style about what had happened. Panic comes as the room plunges into shadows with him racing around trying to keep up with the candles as they go out. Approaching the epiphany, the tension is further highlighted, as the sentences become shorter. Clumsily he knocks his thigh ... ...

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