... grandma it looked like she was loosing weight. Her eyes where red and puffy looking like the cheese puffs she used to buy me for snacks. The house was messy like a tornado had gone through it. There was no food in the kitchen. Her hair was not combed and her face looked more wrinkled than I was used ... air. I shouted "grandma, grandma, grandma come back!" But she kept floating away back to the light. I decided to blow the people away like the big bad wolf blew away the houses of the three little pigs. But the more I blew the faster they went. They took grandma to my dresser and opened ...

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• Grade Level: High School