... of writing that was written by a 12 year old in primary school. The task was to create a personal introduction of a fictional foreign person of their choosing. "Good morning, my name is Oscar Faneite. I am twelve years old and when I grow up I want to be a arquitector because I like buildings very much, I also like mall's a lot and draw, I work in Spain, Madrid ... does not really fit anywhere in the categorization of errors made by Corder. The phrase "My grandpa was one" should be considered 'okey', however, the lack of a proper linking word such as 'moreover' breaks the imme...

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