... 's. They"d had a merry christmas after his chaotic attack and he realises that it's more than the presents and lights. "Maybe, perhaps Christmas means a little bit more than gifts and lights" Emotive language once again here as he realises and starts to care, due to the singing of the Who's and in turn causes his heart to enlarge. Once his heart has stopped ... growing he looks at his dog, who he has treated poorly before hand and then exclaims, "I"m all toasty and tingly inside, oh Max! I love you!" This is too emotive language, as he is touched and realises his dog means more to him th...

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