... a good-bye note, which ends with a "thank you" for all she had done for him. The words of thanks "sent Hagar spinning into a bright blue place where the air was thin and it was silent all the time, and where people spoke in whispers or did not make sound at all". Ever since then every new moon ... and does not realize she is wet with rain until her shopping bag splits. She finally gets home completely wet with all her purchases ruined. She rushes into the bedroom and puts make up on her wet face and her ruined clothes on her body. When Pilate and Reba see her, she sees in ... their face...

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• Grade Level: High School