... in addition to the tone of his language is greatly optimistic which inspires the audience to take his experience an example that proves this."I never had been so truly free in my life."(paragraph 9 p.74).Moreover, his usage of the chronological order "Then aloud,I read back to myself everything I'd written on the tablet"(paragraph 6 p.73) and listing ... at home and asked my teacher at school to provide me with extra exercises to practice more.Until the year ended I mastered this course after I worked hard and dedicated to study intensively and I took in it a grade of seventy over eight...

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