Dear Dr. L ______________, Based on the feedback that I received, I made many changes. My essay was mostly critiqued to be a summary of the works cited. I made an effort to stick to the subject of the essay. I also had to make the thesis stand out more to gain the reader's attention. Furthermore, I attempted to make the essay my own not a summary of work in existence. The strength of my essay is where I explained how Incan culture, government and religion was in no way inferior to that of the Spaniards. The weakness of my essay in my opinion is in my refrain from using footnotes. I attempted t...

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... also in the West Saxon kingdom that a written language first flourished. The language was written in an alphabet called Runic, deriving from the Celtic languages. (Literature: The British Edition p.8) Christian missionaries later brought over the Latin alphabet to Britain from Ireland and this is the alphabet that has remained as the alphabet of the writing system of English. The vocabulary of Old ... were also of Germanic roots (Norman comes from Norseman) and Anglo-Norman was a French dialect that had considerable Germanic influences in addition to the basic Latin roots. (Literature: T...

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... documents that were wrote were dialectal in language, and many writers following wrote in their native dialects, which produced a number of competing regional schools of literature. The first document in Italian is called the "Vernacular Italian," or "Placito Cassinese." It was a document that was written by ... dialect of Tuscany and throughout Florence in Italy. Tuscan departs least in morphology and phonology from the classical Latin. This Tuscan language harmonizes best with the Italian traditions or Latin culture. The first dictionary for Italian was edited in 1612 by the Accademia...

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