1. The Base of Civil Government
... properly designate your quotes. Comment [CB18]: You may not need to describe the transition into society in such detail. After establishing man in the state of nature, your next task is to look to man in government. The transition out of the SON isn't as important as his general critique. So, you could scale back on the description and still make the same point effectively. The variation of ... remaining to draw these themes out and explain why they work to address something in the SON. You would have also benefited from scaling back some of the narrative on the SON to free up room. Oth...
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