1. Hip Hop - Protrayal and Betrayal
... . McLune attempts to present a convincing argument on how hip hop owes its success to the ideology of women hating but she should not be considered for the top prize for persuasive essays. McLune's argument fails to convince the reader because she relies too heavily on pathos and she does not establish credibility. First, McLune's argument fails to persuade the reader to ... to give the reader a purpose for wanting to read further. She fails to validate her view to the reader. McLune should definitely not be considered for the top prize for persuasive essays because she has failed to per...
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