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Consciousness by Joanie Mackowsk


Mackowski forms a layer of images in her poem, with each image interacting with the other to tell a story about the mind. This juxtaposition of images is very clear in the second sentence of the poem. She uses the phrase, "It rests on the head" (Line 3) to create an image about the location of our mind being inside our skull and then immediately follows this with the phrase, "like a bird's nest, woven of twigs and tinsels" (Line 4) to give an overall physical description of the mind itself. The "twigs and tinsel" comparison allows the reader to picture the mind as being made of billions of neurons.
             Mackowski's imagery is not limited to visual imagery alone, but she makes usage of several forms of imagery in her poem to show the connection between our consciousness and physical sensations. For example, while writing "The pile of fallen leaves drifting from the brain to the fingertip burned on the stove" (Lines 6-7), she uses tactile imagery to explain how our brain is the central component of our body and all the nerve signals travel from the brain to each part of the body, with these signals defining our experiences. The image formed by this metaphor is that when we touch a hot thing, our first reaction is to move away from it. This is because the brain instinctively sends a signal to our body part saying it do so. Similarly, in the next phrase she invokes an auditory image by writing "to the grooves in that man's voice as he coos to his dog" (Line 9). Once again, this directs the reader to think of how our physical actions, in this case our ability to speak, are governed by our consciousness and mind.
             After talking about the physical aspects of consciousness, Mackowski turns her attention to the mental aspects of consciousness, our thought process. She depicts our mind as a "compacted galaxy" (Line 16) and then compares the actions of the mind and the thoughts being generated inside it to "its constellations trembling like flies caught in a spider web" (Line 16-17).


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