1. Dr. Heidegger's Experiment
... of time, but he would not have any part of it, he just wanted to observe. [How is this paragraph related to the thesis?] (3) Dr. Heidegger called on four of his friends to help him with his experiment. [This topic sentence suggests a plot summary.] Mr. Medbourne who was a prosperous merchant in his early day (Pg. 579), Colonel Killigrew wasted his years on ... water on the floor and out of the vase causes the experiment to be reversed. (5) As the story started to unfold, also came along with it were different tones. [Poor topic sentence -- How does the tone relate to your view of the th...
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