1. The Importance of Teachers
... there are uncontrollable external factors. Responsibility is a lot like broccoli. It is not as exciting as chocolate, and many people shy away from it for the reason that they do not like it, but it is beneficial. For instance, in Diane Ravitch's article, "The Success of Charter Schools Is a Myth", " she reminisces about "a time when most people assumed that students' performance in school was ... in my introductory paragraph. In my body paragraph I plan to eliminate run-on's, extra commas, and quotes that contradict my argument. For instance, in this section I got rid of a run-on. Resp...
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