There it lay on the bed on Nancy Jones, was a teddy bear, that had belonged once to her one and only daughter Amelia. The teddy bear was old and ragged. It only had one eyes, and its arm that had been sown a million times before was falling off again. When Amelia was only twelve years old she was diagnosed with leukemia. Amelia was very sick and couldn't attend school, hang out with friends, or even so much as use the washroom by her self. Amelia was a very pretty girl. She had blonde curly hair, the bluest eyes that everyone could ever have. The only thing that got in the way of it was that she had a very evil disease, that could only be treated with the medication that made her look anorexic, made her hair fall out, and everything else.
The teddy bear was boughten for Amelia when she was about nine years old. Her favorite Aunt Sandy bought her the teddy bear when she was in the hospital, to make her feel better about being in a rotten place. She took the teddy bear everywhere's, it was her pride, made her want to not give up on her own life, made her feel that she wasn't alone. The teddy bear kept her company when no one else did. It was her one and only friend. .
The hospital room that she was in consisted of one window, a door and an empty bed that no one had been in since she had been there. The room in a way was kind of a creepy feeling, as if there was something ghost like in there. It was cold and smelled of mold & death.
All Amelia ever wanted was to be normal. Play with friends in the park, talk about boys, go to school ,go to her friends houses, listen to her music really loud, and do all the things that twelve year old girls do. But Amelia gave up on all hope of even doing these things at all, because she was in the hospital so much that she couldn't really go to school, or any where's else for that matter. She wanted to do all the things that mattered to her, but she was to weak.
Descriptive Essay A picture is worth a thousand words. There are so many details in pictures, especially the people in pictures. In this picture, Leighanne (left) and Kina (right) are both very unique in appearance. The face and clothing of each girl contributes to their uniqueness. The differen...
Writing a simple cover letter, an academic essay, B.A thesis or Ph.D. dissertation is impossible in a case when you as a writer do not have sound and reliable knowledge on paragraph. ... Students who want to study in a college or university need to learn how to write a paragraph because all other types of academic writing, such as essays, reports, compositions, and research papers, are based on paragraph. ... Use descriptive adjective before noun. ... But example (b) which has a descriptive adjective "outstanding" before noun can motivate the readers to read the rest of the paragraph...
You will write a narrative essay that responds to these questions. ... A Descriptive Title a compelling introduction that both provides the reader with an overview of your topic as well as begins with an interesting picture of you as a learner. ... a conclusion that synthesizes the ideas you have developed in the body of your essay rather than merely summarizes them. ... It should tie together the loose ends of the body of the essay as well as refer to the introduction in some way. 2. ... The final draft of your essay must be at least 1200 words in length, and must include a title. ...
Descriptive Essay: The Dentist The phone rings and I answer. I say "hello'' and the voice on the on the other end of the phone asks for Meghan. I reply, "This is she". The voice says she is calling to remind me of my 4:00 PM dental appointment. I sigh and tell her I will be there. With great r...
Descriptiveness can be found through sight, touch, and hearing. ... Selectively placing words in a sentence, paragraph, essay, or novel should have the outcome of the reader understanding what was read. ... When an event is described in a book through very descriptive and blunt terms, it makes the reader feel like they are there. When a person is described using descriptive terms through the senses, the reader feels as if they actually know the person being described. ... Descriptiveness can be found through sight, touch, and hearing....
The Best American Essays of the Century All of these essays were very carefully written essays. ... were three great essays from the book The Best American Essays of the Century. All of the essays were really descriptive with a lot of meaning. ... Anyone that reads this essay will have to feel something that this essay is talking about. The last essay was Shouting "Fire!" ...
White's "Once More to the Lake" is a descriptive essay that relates his trip to a lake with his son, to the trips that he used to take with his father. Though it is very descriptive, I personally think that it was too descriptive, and less entertaining. ... He ended the essay by relating himself to his son. ... He did not keep my attention throughout the essay or make me feel like his lake was worth visiting. I wouldn't want to ever read this essay again, or share it with friends....
The Broken Leash: Descriptive Essay Do you know a vicious dog in your neighborhood? Isn't he always tied up? What happens when he gets off the leash? Everyone in his or her life one time or another has seen a neighbor's ferocious dog off the leash wandering. This is a story about that dog. Do ...
"Shooting an Elephant" is an essay by George Orwell. ... During the 1920's he wrote this particular essay of his experience. ... Orwell was extrememly descriptive in telling about when he was face to face with the elephant. ... Orwell was particularly descriptive through these parts of "Shooting an Elephant." ... Orwell was descriptive even then in telling this story of being a European in an Asian culture. ...
This essay is for oceanographers or scientists, but can also be understood by a general audience. ... This broadens the essay's audience because anyone can understand numbers. ... By using descriptive words the author gives the reader a visual picture of the event. ... Carson also uses descriptive words to represent the meaning of one concept. Using other descriptive words helps the reader look at a concept from many different angles. ...
