1. How Effective Is Chapter One As An Opening Ch
... almost scorns the people, all so predictable in their ways, but when it comes to his reunion with Clarissa, as with all the rest of the people he observed, he succumbed to the same sighing sound on a downward note', as a greeting for his partner. For the next few pages, Joe concerns himself with describing Clarissa and her relationship with him. We discover a lot about ... , the boy, and Joe. On page 9, a description of the men surrounding the balloon is given, with only a small but significant reference to Jed Parry: As for Jed Parry, my view of him was blocked by the balloon that lay b...
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