1. In The Park
... overcome with envy, not that he is hers but that her spirit and sense of freedom makes her as if a replica of the woman I used to be. When I look back down at my children I see my eldest still drawing his meaningless patterns in dirt, patterns that achieve nothing, do nothing to fix the longing I feel for ... things to be what they once were, patterns that will never fulfil my dreams. These children have taken my spirit away they have eaten me alive ... for me now. He is standing before me. I can smell the reek of cigarettes and strong spirits wafting from him in the steady breeze, and...
- Word Count: 2005
- Approx Pages: 8
- Grade Level: High School