1. In The Park
... him causes me even after all these years. He is so close now it seems I can smell him. ►I open my mouth to greet my lost love, but even as my lips begin to part in the once familiar mouthing of his name, he draws his eyes from me, closing my window to our past. And with his long purposeful stride he ... focus for the narrative, however, is for the reader to notice how her old love stands at the very centre of her lost dreams and ambitions. The woman has built her old love to be a man of epic proportions, perfect in everyway. She used her image of his perfection as a wall to hide behin...
- Word Count: 2005
- Approx Pages: 8
- Grade Level: High School